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Rate/Fix my Blackwing Deck?

Monsters 17

3 Bora the Spear
3 Kalut the Moon shadow
3 Shura the Blue flame
2 Sirocco the Dawn
2 Blizzard the far north
1 Sangan
1 D.D. Crow
1 DARK ARMED DRAGON
1 Gale the Whirlwind

Magic 13
1 Brain Control
3 Black Whirlwind
2 Dark Eruption
2 Allure of Darkness
1 Heavy Storm
1 Cold Wave
2 Book of Moon
1 MST

Traps: 10
1 Torrential Tribute
2 Threatening Roar
1 Delta Crow Anti Reverse
1 Call of the Haunted
1 Mirror Force
2 Bottomless Trap Hole
2 Icarus Attack

I had 2 Battlestorms in my deck, but from what others say, theyre too slow. Any comments?

Also, i'm thinking of adding a Gorz in my deck but i dont know what to take out. Or is that even a good move?

Please rate and fix.
Thanks!

btw, i've been having a blackwing deck from like months ago, and i'm finding that there are so many people that are running blackwings -_-. its getting over rated

if you think it's overrated, make it more original

as for the changes, if you wanna add Gorz into your deck, i suggest getting rid of those dark eruptions
that way, you'll have space for Gorz and a Mind Control i strongly suggest.
you'll find it useful in tuning and getting field advantage

Giant Trunade would be a much better substitute for that Delta Crow since it only destroys face down cards.
You're running Blackwings so one or two turns without your opponent's back row is all you need

there are many diff types of blackwing decks too...
turbo vayu
synchrowings (synchro cat and blackwings)
Sirroco Cat

and w/e you make of them.

I personally play synchrowings
it's basically adding a summoner monk, rescue cat, two airbellums and two neo spacian black panthers

it becomes more of a field control deck and gives Mind Control more use